Computer Hope
Other => Other => Off topic => Topic started by: Ivy on April 27, 2008, 10:59:19 PM
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It started Here (http://www.computerhope.com/forum/index.php/topic,55915.0.html) between Robert and me but these lines framed up in my mind and here it is.
''Fragile leaves are falling on my Patio , they leave no space for the papers on which I wrote my song..............
Every season I see is the season of rain and everything I do is wrong.
As I come down the stairs ,I step into this grass knee high, as long as I can remember been on my own.
Kneel down and tried to pray on my Patio of stone.
Looked up at all those stars that on me once had shone, tossed so many hearts away, so far away thrown .
Was lost in myself, thought I'd never be alone , still thinking of times when stars in my eyes were better that any star that had ever shone.
Close my eyes and pray on my Patio of stone.''
I'll keep adding to this as thoughts come to my mind.
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That's really good Ivy.
You have got me thinking all poetically now...
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Thanks Boo n Lau,
Well someone's name inspired this whole poetry thing........
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I wonder who that was? ???
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Lauraaaaaaaa you are so innocent!!!!!!
Read my poem carefully, Whose name do you see?
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Or (hint) whose screen name do you see?
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Sorry guys I was being sarcastic, anyone who cant see who it is, i'm sorry to say is a bit slow ;D
Smile
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Who is it guys?!! I really don't know Laura !!
Oh boy I should run and hide now...I should but I won't.
If I'm smart I will run away but I'm not so I guess I'll stay , Haaven't you heard , I take my chance on a beautiful stranger....da da daa di da di da
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you make me laugh!!!!
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Glad I can , I like being funny. ;D
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Hedera helix.....imagine a Latin patio without one. ;D
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Hedera helix.....imagine a Latin patio without one. ;D
Robert how do you manage to be so kool!!!!!!!
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Hedera helix.....imagine a Latin patio without one. ;D
Robert how do you manage to be so kool!!!!!!!
What can I say lady? I am controlled by a woodpecker and that
freaky little Internet baby.... ;)
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::: imagines a reply :::
Dearest Ivy -- at last returned to me,
Why do you sorrow so?
Have you forgotten? Don't you remember?
My heart goes where you go.
I caress you in my fields of grass,
My rain does hide your tears.
When you are lost -- bereft of joy --
My stars shall calm your fears.
What you have tossed and thrown away
Is not beyond my reach --
The path is sometimes difficult,
These lessons I must teach...
Your labyrinthine loneliness,
Your pathway so unsure...
Discern the truth beneath your feet:
I am earth. I endure.
So cast the stars out of your eyes,
See the truth inside of you.
We are not so different, you and I --
Dust to dust, tried and true.
Feel my beating heart beneath you now,
Rough against your flesh and bone.
Never, ever, have I loved you more
Than from my patio of stone.
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Oh my God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am Speechless!!!!!!! Breathless!!!!!!!!!
Thankyou so so much, wow I mean really thankyou so much .
Hey you are a writer , won't it be better if you put this on your site instead(you don't have to include my name ), That way you'll have copy right for this , cause its so beautiful.
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::: kicks his toe in the dirt ::: Aw, shucks, ma'am -- t'weren't nothin' :-[
Besides, I thank you for the inspiration!
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I'm so happy that I could inspire you.
I'm your humble fan.
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::: imagines a reply :::
Dearest Ivy -- at last returned to me,
Why do you sorrow so?
Have you forgotten? Don't you remember?
My heart goes where you go.
I caress you in my fields of grass,
My rain does hide your tears.
When you are lost -- bereft of joy --
My stars shall calm your fears.
What you have tossed and thrown away
Is not beyond my reach --
The path is sometimes difficult,
These lessons I must teach...
Your labyrinthine loneliness,
Your pathway so unsure...
Discern the truth beneath your feet:
I am earth. I endure.
So cast the stars out of your eyes,
See the truth inside of you.
We are not so different, you and I --
Dust to dust, tried and true.
Feel my beating heart beneath you now,
Rough against your flesh and bone.
Never, ever, have I loved you more
Than from my patio of stone.
That's beautiful Brian.Keep up the good work.
I checked your web page...... ;). You my friend
are very good indeed!!
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Thank you, Robert.
I appreciate that you took the time to visit my mess of a webpage.
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Poem removed for protection
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Alrighty I'm going to be around for a couple of days more and then I'll be leaving again guys.
I'll miss everything.
This time I won't stay away for 5 months though, I'll return sooner than that.
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As you keep drowning my world,
I'm trying to learn to breathe in here.
What you wish to endure will be too hard for me to bear.
Forbidden feelings so sweet so pure we share,
In the blink of the eye , your voice led me there,
Somewhere something that I thought could never be
Is turning out to be real for the sun is touching the moon right infront of me.
Wounds of the past , my veil torn and stained.
I ran out barefoot last night for last night it rained.
You rained on me and I was drenched in you.
Opened my eyes this morning,
I feel clean and pure as if born anew.
Now it is my turn to thank you, Ivy, with words I do not have...
Like a ringing bell, as it's echo fades...sometimes it is best to just listen,
sometimes the most is said in silence.
Thank you.
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Thankyou, and I've learned to listen to a lot of things that I had forgotten thanks to a very special friend of mine.
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Now see I think you used Patio a little to much >:( cmon we need more Wefr0 so here I edited for you its better :)
''Fragile leaves are falling on Wefr0 , they leave no space for the papers on which I wrote my song..............
Every season I see is the season of rain and everything I do is wrong.
As I come down the stairs ,I step into this grass knee high, as long as I can remember been on my own.
Kneel down and tried to pray on my statue of Wefr0
Looked up at all those stars that on me once had shone, tossed so many hearts away, so far away thrown .
Was lost in myself, thought I'd never be alone , still thinking of times when stars in my eyes were better that any star that had ever shone.
Close my eyes and pray on my Statue of Wefr0.''
I'll keep adding to this as thoughts come to my mind.
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Oh, yes! It's much better now! ;)
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This is what is in my mind....... I gotta get in the mood.
The dream
I wake up in the dark look out my window and see the Vivid streams of colors outside.
I think to myself life should always be like this.
A comet passes bye, I wish you were here.
I keep walking as the neon colors glows as stars burn.
Alone, dark, quite.
Come into my world it will soon be reality.
I gaze up at my constellations.
I walk north and look at The sky again.
The sounds are Interstellar.
The stars are the right color.
The Planets pass each other like clockwork, A Orbital masterpiece.
The sun is close enough but far away enough to give enough light.
Streams of Gold, Fires of orange.
This is my universe this is my sanctuary.
The moons Peacefully fly with the ring of rocks.
I shape it perfectly.
I shake my head.
I move my fingers.
I awake, soon my friend my world will be reality soon.......
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I like that!
It sets a mood. Good imagery!
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I like that!
It sets a mood. Good imagery!
Would you like to here mine ?
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Ode To The Dentist: By PeckerWood
Cavities all around bacon like smells
The tallest on hevered up ham some
The doctors cough dried up a paint can
SHOOGA!!! goes the patient
(http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l97/street1-1/Peckerhead.jpg)
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:) Shades of Ogden Nash!
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I call it, an Ode to a Curd:
It sits in the cupboard.
beckoning.
teasing.
but locked away.
buy it in hoardes.
solid.
grated.
or chopped my way.
As my olfactory
determines it's name
I think of it's flavour
I think of it's name
I quickly feel shame
what am I thinking?
what is it about?
why, nothing but cheese,
with no trace of doubt.
took me about 10 minutes to come up with that one. Not exactly prize-winning.
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Hi guys, I'm back but won't be around as much as I used to be.
Life's going great and new and fresh.
College started on 9th and its awesome.
Missed you all.
Glad you guys have used a lot of imagination, love you all.
--Ivy
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Wefr0 remember you are my lil Brother!!!!!!
So honey, your name can't be in that poem and by the word patio , I mean the patio of a house(front garden type thing made of stone or anything).
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WefrO is not my sister folks.... ;D
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blegghh
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WefrO is not my sister folks.... Grin
Thank you, street, for clearing up the question burning in the hearts of all of us! ;)
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WefrO is not my sister folks.... Grin
Thank you, street, for clearing up the question burning in the hearts of all of us! ;)
This question is a year old, its a looooooooooong story........
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WefrO is not my sister folks.... Grin
Thank you, street, for clearing up the question burning in the hearts of all of us! ;)
This question is a year old, its a looooooooooong story........
Hard to remember how that got started but, I am friends online with WefrO.
He just ain't my sister.... (http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l97/street1-1/lol-1.gif)(http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l97/street1-1/lol-1.gif)(http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l97/street1-1/lol-1.gif)
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Friends? All of you BOW DOWN TO ME NOW!
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Ivy looks just like that girl in my math and Art class but just wavier hair
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I bow to my little brother.
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Ivy looks just like that girl in my math and Art class but just wavier hair
I could be :P ::)
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I bow to my little brother.
So, WefrO is your brother............. ???
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I bow to my little brother.
So, WefrO is your brother............. ???
I made him my brother a year back when a lot of people were hurting him,and he's my sweet brother now.
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I bow to my little brother.
So, WefrO is your brother............. ???
I made him my brother a year back when a lot of people were hurting him,and he's my sweet brother now.
Good for you Ivy. ;) WefrO is a nice member of Computerhope.
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See I dont actually do anything here I just sit here and occasionally help
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A FIGURE WILL RISE OVER THE HEAVENS! AS FIRE AND BLACKNESS CORRUPTS THE SKY A HOLE SHALL APPEAR DEEP INTO THE GROUND SUCKING THE WORLD IN IT DISEASE WILL SPILL FROM HIS MOUTH AND FIRE SHALL SHAPE THE WORLD AS PEOPLE RUN THEY WILL BE LIFTED BYE AN UN WORLDLY FORCE A TREE WILL RISE WITH HORNS AND HUMANS WILL BE PLACED ON THE TREE LIKE ORNAMENTS!
The end
So I made it for you guys ya like?
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You people are weird.
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You people are weird.
And we aren't inviting any non-weird people to our family ;D
Anyway CBmatt congrats for being on staff in saviour forum.
I thought you had left CH ::)
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Nope, I didn't leave, nor do I plan on leaving. I just had to take a break from the forums because I've been very busy with school, looking for a house, looking for jobs, planning a wedding, etc. But the semester is over and I'm out of school for a month, which is why I've been around a lot more lately.
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Nope, I didn't leave, nor do I plan on leaving. I just had to take a break from the forums because I've been very busy with school, looking for a house, looking for jobs, planning a wedding, etc. But the semester is over and I'm out of school for a month, which is why I've been around a lot more lately.
Good to know.
And no matter where one goes CH is the best.
Congrats for the wedding etc, have fun, also good to know that you are not marrying the tattoed lady.....
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Um...what? What tattooed lady?
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Weren't you going out with that lady with tattoo's before this old fashioned one?
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They're the same girl. My ex has no tattoos. My fiancé has four: a bull, a puffin, a flamingo, and a rubber duck.
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They're the same girl. My ex has no tattoos. My fiancé has four: a bull, a puffin, a flamingo, and a rubber duck.
Oh boy!!!!!
I must have gotten mixed up!!!!!
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Heh, it's alright, I don't really expect anyone to keep up on my love life. Thankfully, there won't be any other girls that you'll have to remember. Ha.
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Chris, protect her from the raccoons ....
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Chris, protect her from the raccoons ....
Time to block up all the drain pipes :P
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Well here are my thoughts:
I watch him lay there, sound asleep
All I want is to reach out and touch him.
While I lay here, alone with my thoughts
My heart breaks a little more with every beat it makes.
The tears wont stop, please someone make them stop!!!
Everyone is blind to my tears,
Heaven is deaf to my bootless cries,
And even *censored* turns away from my sorrow.
How can this be happening?
Everything I love so much seems to be slipping away
How do I hold on, how do I...
What does it matter.
I shall lay here on the ground; wishing, praying
for a single sound.
The sound of someone there
someone to care.
As I lay here all I ask
Is that I may close my eyes and fade away;
Take me to a place where I wont remember,
A place where I cannot feel.
Make me numb
And please for god sake stop the tears!!!!!!
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I would gently say to embrace your feelings, and not deny them or wish them away.
You have a treasure inside you.
Hold fast to the center.
Hold on to yourself.
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What treasure?
There is nothing left of myself to hold onto!
My feelings, my sorrow tis too much for my tiny soul.
The slightest glimmer of anyone gives me hope but only for a brief moment
And before I know it, its gone!
As I lay here, and slowly fade away I pray that maybe someone will remember my name.
No one will cry, no one will miss me.
So carry on and smile,
Remember to always have a kick a$$ day
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The last line intrigues me:
Who says every day is gonna "kick anatomy"?
Are you so sure you are not thought of, you are not remembered?
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Those who know me will soon forget me. :'(
If every day doesnt kick anatomy then you'll get kicked.
Thank you for replying to my post, at least someone out there took the time to listen
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Those who know me will soon forget me. :'(
I already have.
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Those who know me will soon forget me. :'(
If every day doesnt kick anatomy then you'll get kicked.
Thank you for replying to my post, at least someone out there took the time to listen
I dont even know you
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Everybody's a comedian... ::)
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Everybody's a comedian... ::)
how are you so sure? Do you know them? :D
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This thread makes me think of a famous youtube link. Why ?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5oEYMGL0ZtA