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metalcat3

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    Would like an advice on page I made
    « on: October 18, 2018, 02:48:26 PM »
    Hi

    I would like to get opinions and advice on a simple recommendations system I made. Mostly - how much is it clear and helpful visually?
    That's a page about  https://www.glj.io/gaming-laptops-under-1000 (under $1000, but no matter)

    I that's not the right place, please let me know
    « Last Edit: October 18, 2018, 04:13:16 PM by Allan »

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    Re: Would like an advice on page I made
    « Reply #1 on: October 18, 2018, 03:45:58 PM »
    For starters -- the link you posted is not working.

    I assume it should be -- https://www.glj.io/gaming-laptops-under-1000 that you wanted to be linking to I guess.
    « Last Edit: October 18, 2018, 04:13:04 PM by Allan »

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    Re: Would like an advice on page I made
    « Reply #2 on: October 18, 2018, 04:13:31 PM »
    I corrected the link in the original post.

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      Re: Would like an advice on page I made
      « Reply #3 on: October 19, 2018, 02:29:25 AM »
      I corrected the link in the original post.

      Thanks! But how can I edit this? the text looks strange right now (-:

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      Re: Would like an advice on page I made
      « Reply #4 on: October 19, 2018, 03:40:46 AM »
      First, I think you should proofread. There is a lot of very awkward phrasing as well as grammatical weirdness. This makes it difficult to take the text seriously.

      Also why does something that says it was posted a week ago have comments claiming to be from 4 years ago?
      I was trying to dereference Null Pointers before it was cool.

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        Re: Would like an advice on page I made
        « Reply #5 on: October 19, 2018, 02:02:43 PM »
        First, I think you should proofread. There is a lot of very awkward phrasing as well as grammatical weirdness. This makes it difficult to take the text seriously.

        Also why does something that says it was posted a week ago have comments claiming to be from 4 years ago?

        1. Thanks. English is not my mother tongue, I guess that's the awkward phrasing comes from. Can you give me a hint?
        2. The post is indeed around 5-5.5 years old, and it kept updated.
        3. But I'm more concerned with the filtering and laptop models UI

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        Re: Would like an advice on page I made
        « Reply #6 on: October 19, 2018, 02:22:03 PM »
        It's 5 years old...it's outdated...but keep workin on it.
        " Anyone who goes to a psychiatrist should have his head examined. "

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          Re: Would like an advice on page I made
          « Reply #7 on: October 20, 2018, 01:11:07 AM »
          It's 5 years old...it's outdated...but keep workin on it.

          It's 5 years old and being updated. The recommendations are current

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            Re: Would like an advice on page I made
            « Reply #8 on: November 08, 2018, 12:38:03 PM »
            Does anyone use a VPN to play games??