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Re: Alright I put my thoughts in words.
« Reply #15 on: April 30, 2008, 12:06:16 AM »
::: kicks his toe in the dirt :::  Aw, shucks, ma'am -- t'weren't nothin'    :-[

Besides, I thank you for the inspiration!
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Re: Alright I put my thoughts in words.
« Reply #16 on: April 30, 2008, 12:12:21 AM »
I'm so happy that I could inspire you.

I'm your humble fan.

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Re: Alright I put my thoughts in words.
« Reply #17 on: April 30, 2008, 05:04:43 AM »
::: imagines a reply :::

Dearest Ivy -- at last returned to me,
Why do you sorrow so?
Have you forgotten?  Don't you remember?
My heart goes where you go.

I caress you in my fields of grass,
My rain does hide your tears.
When you are lost -- bereft of joy --
My stars shall calm your fears.

What you have tossed and thrown away
Is not beyond my reach --
The path is sometimes difficult,
These lessons I must teach...

Your labyrinthine loneliness,
Your pathway so unsure...
Discern the truth beneath your feet:
I am earth.  I endure.

So cast the stars out of your eyes,
See the truth inside of you.
We are not so different, you and I --
Dust to dust, tried and true.

Feel my beating heart beneath you now,
Rough against your flesh and bone.
Never, ever, have I loved you more
Than from my patio of stone.



That's beautiful Brian.Keep up the good work.

I checked your web page...... ;). You my friend
are very good indeed!!
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Re: Alright I put my thoughts in words.
« Reply #18 on: April 30, 2008, 10:34:04 AM »
Thank you, Robert.

I appreciate that you took the time to visit my mess of a webpage.


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Re: Alright I put my thoughts in words.
« Reply #19 on: May 01, 2008, 12:50:24 AM »
Poem removed for protection
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Re: Alright I put my thoughts in words.
« Reply #20 on: May 01, 2008, 01:08:28 AM »
Alrighty I'm going to be around for a couple of days more and then I'll be leaving again guys.

I'll miss everything.

This time I won't stay away for 5 months though, I'll return sooner than that.


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Re: Alright I put my thoughts in words.
« Reply #21 on: May 01, 2008, 02:01:06 AM »
Quote
As you keep drowning my world,
I'm trying to learn to breathe in here.
What you wish to endure will be too hard for me to bear.
Forbidden feelings so sweet so pure we share,
In the blink of the eye , your voice led me there,
Somewhere something that I thought could never be
Is turning out to be real for the sun is touching the moon right infront of me.

Wounds of the past , my veil torn and stained.
I ran out barefoot last night for last night it rained.
You rained on me and I was drenched in you.
Opened my eyes this morning,
I feel clean and pure as if born anew.

Now it is my turn to thank you, Ivy, with words I do not have...
Like a ringing bell, as it's echo fades...sometimes it is best to just listen,
sometimes the most is said in silence.
Thank you.



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Re: Alright I put my thoughts in words.
« Reply #22 on: May 01, 2008, 02:07:32 AM »
Thankyou, and I've learned to listen to a lot of things that I had forgotten thanks to a very special friend of mine.


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Re: Alright I put my thoughts in words.
« Reply #23 on: May 04, 2008, 07:12:31 PM »
Now see I think you used Patio a little to much >:( cmon we need more Wefr0 so here I edited for you its better :)
 
''Fragile leaves are falling on Wefr0 , they leave no space for the papers on which I wrote my song..............
Every season I see is the season of rain and everything I do is wrong.

As I come down the stairs ,I step into this grass knee high, as long as I can remember been on my own.

Kneel down and tried to pray on my statue of Wefr0


Looked up at all those stars that on me once had shone, tossed so many hearts away, so far away thrown .

Was lost in myself, thought I'd never be alone , still thinking of times when stars in my eyes were better that any star that had ever shone.

Close my eyes and pray on my Statue of Wefr0.''

I'll keep adding to this as thoughts come to my mind.

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Re: Alright I put my thoughts in words.
« Reply #24 on: May 05, 2008, 02:46:03 PM »
Oh, yes!  It's much better now!   ;)


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Re: Alright I put my thoughts in words.
« Reply #25 on: May 07, 2008, 07:15:28 PM »
This is what is in my mind....... I gotta get in the mood.
The dream

I wake up in the dark look out my window and see the Vivid streams of colors outside.
I think to myself life should always be like this.
A comet passes bye, I wish you were here.
I keep walking as the neon colors glows as stars burn.
Alone, dark, quite.
Come into my world it will soon be reality.
I gaze up at my constellations.
I walk north and look at The sky again.
The sounds are Interstellar.
The stars are the right color.
The Planets pass each other like clockwork, A Orbital masterpiece.
The sun is close enough but far away enough to give enough light.
Streams of Gold, Fires of orange.
This is my universe this is my sanctuary.
The moons Peacefully fly with the ring of rocks.
I shape it perfectly.
I shake my head.
I move my fingers.
I awake, soon my friend my world will be reality soon.......

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Re: Alright I put my thoughts in words.
« Reply #26 on: May 08, 2008, 06:42:09 AM »
I like that!

It sets a mood.  Good imagery!


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Re: Alright I put my thoughts in words.
« Reply #27 on: May 08, 2008, 06:10:16 PM »
I like that!

It sets a mood.  Good imagery!

Would you like to here mine ?
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Re: Alright I put my thoughts in words.
« Reply #28 on: May 08, 2008, 06:16:18 PM »
Ode To The Dentist: By PeckerWood


Cavities all around bacon like smells
The tallest on hevered up ham some
The doctors cough dried up a paint can
SHOOGA!!! goes the patient


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Re: Alright I put my thoughts in words.
« Reply #29 on: May 09, 2008, 11:00:19 AM »
 :)  Shades of Ogden Nash!


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