Just did a test of Win 10 on an external HHD as per instructions on your link
Guess what...it booted the 1st time...and never since.
Careful what you Post.
I just now installed it on an old desktop hasn't been used for months. It took two treys to get it up. .And then it gripe about my password. I forgot my password. After going around and around and around in the lost password loop it finally let me in.
Explanation: My second monitor had gone out. So I had to swap with another PC that has my passwords. So I could not get to my password list. So I asked Windows 10 to reset my password by email. My laptop PC did not have the password for my email account. Finally, I used my phone to retrieve the code from my email.
Amway, it is not the fault of Windows 10 that I forgot my password. Part of the problem was that I had to repair the old hard drive I was using.